Forging Immortality Chapter 03

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Not a very good chapter this week. Nothing wrong with it I don’t think, just rambles a bit and jot Mich happens. We’ve finally arrived at the masters though, the hell arc has its meat now. Let’s see how it plays out. If the next chapter is still boring I’ll dump the plans and cut to the chase with some hand waving.

Anyway, let me know what you think and feel free to make suggestions. Thanks.

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Forging Immortality Chapter 02

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Here you go. I started messing with Hero and SWRPG again over the last few days and somehow that led me to the decision to scrap the original chapter two. This version only had a few hours to marinade consequently. Hopefully that wasn’t a mistake.

I wanted to make it sound less like an info dump. Not sure if the new version flows but the info is at least broken up somewhat now.

Let me know what you guys think. If the chapter is bad it is early enough in the story I should be able to write the mistakes back out. Anyway enjoy.

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Forging Immortality Chapter 01

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Alright guy and gals, (well probably not gals), Forging Immortality is kind of an east meets west amalgamation of quasi mythology, standard xianxia fiction and whatever the hell else I feel like. That is to say nothing is impossible.

Also, in case it’s a big deal for anyone, or anyone is offended, or even just curious, Forging Immortality does not constitute my views on the afterlife. I am not making any sort of profound, or even profoundly stupid, statements about heaven and hell etc. This is purely fiction.

There will not be an equal representation of everyone’s religious viewpoint. Why? Because that would be a lot of work, it would equally offend everyone and frankly because it’s my mother flipping story and I’ll do what I want with it.

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Forging Immortality Begins

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I’m not sure how Forging Immortality will unfold, I have only planned the broad strokes at this point. It will basically be a trial run at the xianxia genre I’ve strayed into in the past. I intend it to start slow before it picks up speed but if it reads boring or I get paranoid I may change my mind. Regardless I am very happy with this initial intro to the main character…

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